Amazing story. I love the world you created, completely fascinating. I'm curious to know what happened to Chad, did he come under some punishment or was he looked after and helped to get over what Steve did and made him do?
I felt bad for Steve, losing his brother, but it's sad that he kinda went a little crazy.
I love that you had the God being real and proven real, that was a great thing to add.
Overall a completely riveting story, I really really enjoyed reading it. Thank you. :D