ext_19467 ([identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] essene_backup 2015-01-17 08:16 pm (UTC)

This was a nice, slightly lighter touch to the werewolf-high school AU. I don't read them often, but I was sucked in by this excellent line: It was a shame that Jared couldn't smell him. One of the things he liked most about the pool--the sublimation of all smells to the chlorine, the relief of being nose-blind for awhile--was now a cause for aggravation.

Nice! I like seeing the physical differences between were and human! I hope that some of the things you touched on in the epilogue get expanded in time stamps!

Thanks so much for sharing this, it was fun to read. :)

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