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Table: A Picture is worth a thousand words
rating: ADULT
Prompt:  12






Jared's of the opinion that gay porn doesn't have enough fingering. Or rimming. This is based on having spent the past 4 hours watching various bits of Sean Cody, Corbin Fisher and Randy Blue vids. The boys are pretty and clean and built well. Pleasing to look at, but so many of them are "gay for pay" that it's clear they haven't yet discovered (or may not even be aware of) the absolute pleasure that comes from working your partner open for your cock. Or being worked open.

Jared wouldn't be spending his time thusly if Jensen weren't at a family wedding in Boston. Since he was 12 , he's been pretty much incapable of keeping it in his pants for more than 24 hours and Jensen's been gone for over two days now and isn't set to come back to Vancouver until Monday--3 more days away. He's got needs.

There's the phone sex, and that's great, but occasionally, Jared likes a bit of visual stimulation. And while he appreciates the vids that these internet porn kings supply, he wishes that there was a bit more time spent on the prepping of the asshole rather than the cramming of it.

Jensen was a bit hesitant at first when Jared first licked and sucked his way around his balls, over his perineum and down to the tight clench of Jensen's asshole. But Jared was an aficionado of ass and since he was finally getting to the place he'd longed to be for months he wasn't going to give up without a fight.

His tongue lavished light teasing licks all along the smooth skin, relishing the tiny raised folds and dips that led to the musky center of Jensen's ass. His technique doesn't vary much from that first time (why mess with a sure thing?): he pulls back and blows lightly, presses in and kisses firmly, lays his tongue along the cleft and laves long slow sweeps until Jensen is huffing above him and hooking his hands under his knees to hold himself open for Jared's thorough exploration. From that point, Jared would suck and nibble and flutter over Jensen's rosy gather, until it seemed to unfurl on it's own, Jensen's muscles loosening to let him enter.

With a thoroughly lubricated finger, Jared would then firmly massage in concentric circles from Jensen's relaxing anus out and back in again, letting his fingertip slip just past the constricting cinch of muscle, just far enough to elicit a moan and a hiss from Jensen, and then he would continue licking the delicate skin of Jensen's crease while slowing pressing the tip of his finger side-to-side and up-and-down against the restrictive muscle guarding Jensen's inner walls.

A few minutes after that and Jensen's hips would begin to rock, sending Jared's finger farther inside his grasping depths; Jared letting Jensen work himself open on his finger, the tightness causing his finger to numb from lack of circulation. Jared would wait patiently for Jensen to take the whole length of his first finger--nuzzling the soft ginger hair of his balls, stroking the base of his cock with his tongue--until he felt Jensen bottoming out on his third knuckle. Once that happened, he'd nudge in a second while sucking Jensen's twitching prick in to the root.

The time it took before Jared started scissoring his fingers and twisting them in and out of Jensen grew shorter and shorter each time, Jensen's body becoming familiar with the sensation and muscle memory learning that the quicker the relaxation happened, the sooner Jared's cock would be stretching the intensely sensitive ring of muscle again and again and again.

And Jared loved fucking Jensen. But there was something to be said for reducing your partner to an instinctive primal state just from properly applied pressure and friction.

Sighing, Jared wished that guys would learn that foreplay wasn't just for girls.
 

Date: 2009-10-13 09:09 pm (UTC)
ext_90: crop of 'The Morning Star' by Alphonse Mucha; woman in flowing gown with hand to forehead, painted in greens and golds (Default)
From: [identity profile] gblvr.livejournal.com
See -- I'd like to see more foreplay in fic. And to be honest, we get a ton more with places like Sean Cody than we do with most porn, het included.

Anyhoo -- I like this, and I think you should show us more of Jared taking Jensen apart with his fingers and tongue....

Date: 2009-10-14 01:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] essene.livejournal.com
True, foreplay is not the focus in many fics...including my own.

Moar huh? I'll see what I can do...

Date: 2009-10-13 10:34 pm (UTC)
desdemonaspace: by <lj user="Teragramm"> (Smiling Uhuru)
From: [personal profile] desdemonaspace
Whoo! I do not read slash as a rule, but that was hot.

**fans self**

BTW, did the Topol video ever arrive?

Date: 2009-10-14 01:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] essene.livejournal.com
AWWWWW!!! Thanks for venturing over to the darkside sweetheart!

*hugs*

Yes, the Topol vid came, but I'll be damned if I can figure out where I put it...am I to send it back to you? *bites nails* eep

Date: 2009-10-14 10:37 pm (UTC)
desdemonaspace: by <lj user="Teragramm"> (Orange Kaylee)
From: [personal profile] desdemonaspace
Heck no! That was for you.

Date: 2009-10-13 11:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wesleysgirl.livejournal.com
Whoa, that was very hot. I don't know what I was expecting based on the picture, but I don't think it was THAT. LOL!! (In a good way!)

Date: 2009-10-14 01:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] essene.livejournal.com
HA! Glad you liked! It's like suprise!fingering! \o/

Date: 2009-10-14 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spiralleds.livejournal.com
True confessions - I read it (TC 1, since you know me and my general disinterest in RPF) and then was thinking about it later (TC 2). Those thoughts were about how I was admiring/bordering on jealous of your structure/style. The way it start with fingering/foreplay and then came back full circle to that first thought. The contrast of the impersonal get-to-the-penetration porn with the highly personal of knowing every sigh and shudder of a partner. The way it's all about sex and is sexy, but really it's not PWP, it's a character study told through sex.

Mad skillz, girl.

Date: 2009-10-14 11:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] essene.livejournal.com
*blushes profusely* Damn. That's high praise.

And a million thanks for reading because I'm VERY aware of your TC 1.

Date: 2009-10-16 01:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spiralleds.livejournal.com
Well, given I'm reading yours, DT's, and the J2/Big Bang Crossover DT was looking for a while back, I may have to give up on claiming I don't read RPF. :P

Date: 2009-10-16 04:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] essene.livejournal.com
HA!!! Slippery slope baybee, slippery slope. You've definitely crossed the border.

Date: 2009-10-14 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] softbluebuddy.livejournal.com
Very nicely done. I love to be on the receiving end of that myself. And, frankly I am quite fond of being on the giving end as well.

Nice descriptions. Will be sending the link to my partner. I think he'll enjoy, though he may not comment. Hope you don't mind.

Date: 2009-10-14 11:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] essene.livejournal.com
I do not mind at all! And thanks! That means a lot! I'm not much for the anal play myself--so to hear that I sorta got it right is really meaningful feedback!

Date: 2009-10-14 05:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] helloapollo.livejournal.com
I read this yesterday, but it was while I was dawdling before work, and right after I finished reading, I slammed the laptop shut and said "okay, I really really do have to leave now." I did enjoy it, though!

Date: 2009-10-16 04:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] essene.livejournal.com
THANK YOU!!!!!

Date: 2009-10-14 07:20 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ewlyn.livejournal.com
Sighing, Jared wished that guys would learn that foreplay wasn't just for girls. I love how you ended this.

Date: 2009-10-16 04:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] essene.livejournal.com
Thanks! *huge grin*

Date: 2009-10-29 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yumezaka.livejournal.com
Oh HOT!!
I love the way you wrote the foreplay. I've read foreplay fics a lot but most don't really hold your interest enough. Just describing the procedure and sort of breaks the spell so I usually skip that part and go on. NOT HERE. THIS is true foreplay, getting hot and exciting as you go along. The way you ended it was great too!
Thank you for a wonderful read!!
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